Protect the World, Protect Our Home

姓名：张同学 学校：北京市太平路中学 分数：96

Almost every day, we see birds fly in the blue sky. In spring, flowers bloom luxuriantly; in summer, trees grow like many big umbrellas; in autumn, maple leaves float in the wind; in winter, snow makes everything white. How beautiful they are! Earth is our home, so we need to protect her. But do you know that earth is in a great danger? These days, the most necessary thing is to protect the environment. Not only is the pollution bad for our health, but also ruin our home, the earth. We all know that the air and the water are very important in our life, but we can still notice many problems in our community. First, there is a river in front of my house, but I can see rubbish and there's little water in the river. Because of the niff, almost everyone who walk passes there couldn't help say:\"When can we have a nice and clean river?\" Second, the Spring Festival is coming so there are some people playing firecrackers near my community, they are so happy. Apart from the explosion, the sky is full of smoke. Too much smoke can make us ill, so the environment near my community is also noisy and dirty. Recently, too much smoke also makes the haze more serious. To make our environment better, we should begin from ourselves. I often ask my parents to use something recycled and do refuse classification. We all should bear a part in protecting the earth. Meanwhile, a nice environment with joint efforts is one full of vitality and fresh air.I want to let more people know that start protecting the world is not too late now. I think no matter how slow it gets, we should do things we can do.

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该作文思想明确，内容丰富，词汇多样，逻辑清晰，可以看出是位语言功底较深厚的同学。