【新题型】2016年10月浙江高考英语真题案例—读后续写

2016年10⽉，浙江省秋季⾼考结束了。传说已久的英语试题读后续写总算是露出了庐⼭真⾯⽬！然⽽，参考答案⾥并没有续写的范⽂。不过，夏⽼师英语提供了续写范⽂，供⼤家参考。

第⼆节 读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下⾯短⽂，根据所给情节进⾏续写，使之构成⼀个完整的故事。

◆题型解读

与以往的⾼考英语命题作⽂不同，读后续写要求考⽣⾸先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字⾯含义，还要理清⽂章的脉络和关系。续写短⽂时，考⽣需要明⽩故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、⼈物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考⽣顺着⽂章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进⾏合理预测，并⽤英语表达出来。同时，在组织语⾔时，切记使⽤5个以上给出的提⽰词。◆故事主线已知线索：

吵架——出⾛——迷路——失联——⾃救——思念——寻路——直升机——飞离……拂晓……可续写线索：

失望？坚信？曲折？直升机？Tom？⾃救？获救？◆续写词汇已给提⽰词汇：

Jane, Tom, lake, walk, climb, at a distance, to her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouse话题激活词汇：

环境：forest, stream, rock, berry, valley, steep, cave, lake, waterfall (⼈⼝、环境与⾃然)困难：hunger, starve, thirsty, injure, broken, blood, panic, shelter, survive (survival), suffer, cold, severe (天⽓与⾃然灾害)

活动: walk, climb, fall, crawl, taste, attempt, struggle to one’s feet, make one’s way to, pick up (⼈体与动作)

情绪：to one’s great joy, break down

救援：rescue team, doctor, search for, spot (天⽓与⾃然灾害)意志品质：calm, courage, will (性格与⾏为特征)评价：amazing, make itPossible versions: 1.

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But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in theforest for another cold night. Although she felt a little sad, she didn’t get fearful. She thoughtabout Tom. “He must have called for those helicopters. Maybe he was in one of them and willcome back again! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom. Paragraph 2:

It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along the stream,hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Fortunately, she saw a huge flat rock inan open area at a distance. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it and waited. To her greatjoy, the helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she flagged the yellow blouse.Luckily, the helicopter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tomjumped off the helicopter and ran towards Jane. She broke down and burst into tears. (续写词数：154)2.

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But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane tried to find shelter fromthe night cold. But unfortunately, she slipped over and broke her leg. With the extreme pain,Jane managed to make her way to a rock for shelter. Under the rock, Jane stayed wide awake,knowing she might not be able to get to the lake with a broken leg. “Don’t be afraid. Tom mustbe searching for me. And the helicopter will come back tomorrow,” she thought to herself. Afterquite a while, Jane fell asleep.

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It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She struggled to her feet and headed for the stream. After

having some berries and stream water, Jane walked slowly to an open area to wait for herrescue. To her great joy, she soon heard the helicopter. Jane madly waved her yellow blousewhen it came into sight. Sadly, the helicopter flied away again. However, soon came the

rescue team, together with Tom, who had found Jane’s location from the helicopter. Jane wassaved.

(续写词数：163)

附：2016浙江书⾯表达应⽤⽂分析第⼀节 应⽤⽂写作1. 真题回顾

假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换⽣ (exchange student) 去加拿⼤⼀所⾼中学习，住在Lynn家⾥。请给Lynn写⼀封邮件，内容包括： 1. 介绍⾃⼰； 2. 告知到达时间； 3. 询问应做何准备。注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使⾏⽂连贯。

2. 内容分析

3. 参考范⽂Dear Lynn,

I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m happy to know that I’ll be staying with yourfamily in the next few months while I’m studying at the local high school. Thank you for havingme! I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon. I wonder ifyou could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada. Looking forward to seeing you!Best wishes,Li Hua

4.试卷总体难度分析

附：2016年10⽉浙江⾼考英语改⾰2016年10⽉浙江⾼考英语改⾰

酝酿已久的⾼考英语改⾰终于拉开了⼤幕。2016年10⽉⾼考英语考试怎么改，改了多少，对于试点地区浙江省的英语教学与考试⼜会产⽣哪些影响?下⽂从题型变化解读⼊⼿，希望能帮助各位⽼师尽快熟悉新题型。题型变化

相⽐2015年浙江省⾼考英语真题，新⾼考阅读部分考查题型有如下变化：第⼆部分：阅读理解第⼀节 阅读理解题

2015浙江⾼考真题阅读A: 5道阅读B: 4道阅读C: 5道阅读D: 6道20道20×2=40不少于1800

2016⾼考新题型阅读A: 3道阅读B: 3道阅读C: 4道10道

10×2.5=25不少于800

篇幅与题量总数分值字数

备注

考查学⽣理解主旨和要义、获取事实细节、根据上下⽂猜测词义、作出简单的判断和推理、分析⽂章的基本结构、理解作者的意图、观点和态度。虽然最新⾼考阅读篇幅会减少，但是设题难度有可能升⾼，因此不能掉以轻⼼。

第⼆节 新题型阅读

2015浙江⾼考真题阅读6选55×2=10句⾸概括

2016⾼考新题型阅读7选55×2=10

段⾸、段中、段尾概括、上下⽂推理

题型分值

考点位置考查能⼒

第三部分：语⾔运⽤第⼀节 完形填空

题量不变，分值从1分每题增加为1.5分每题。

完形填空考试题型不变。考查考⽣在阅读理解的基础上运⽤词汇知识的能⼒。在⼀篇

约250词(2015浙江⾼考真题完形词数为350左右)的短⽂中留出20个空⽩，要求考⽣从每题所给的4个选项中选出最佳选项，使补⾜后的短⽂意思通顺、前后连贯、结构完整。第⼆节 语法填空

对浙江省的⾼中⽣来说，语法填空是⼀个新题型，代替原来的单项选择题。考查考⽣在阅读理

解的基础上运⽤语法和语⽤知识的能⼒。在⼀篇200词左右的语⾔材料中留出10个空⽩，部分空⽩的后⾯给出单词的基本形式，要求考⽣根据上下⽂填写空⽩处所需的内容(1个单词)或所提供单词的正确形式。第四部分：写作

第⼀节 短⽂改错改为应⽤⽂写作，分值为15分，词数要求为80左右;

第⼆节 读后续写或概要写作，两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使⽤，分值25分。这两类作⽂形式对于浙江考⽣来说是全新的，所以会有较⼤的难度.