[精选]八年级英语作文及范文(50篇)

初中英语作文题目及范文解读

1．假如你是李平，交换生Jim很快来你校学习，并住在你家。请阅读以下来自Jim的邮件并回复。

注意：（1）词数80左右；

（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Ping，

Thanks for telling me about your school life. I can't wait to start my life there next month. But I'm also wondering what to do in my free time. Can you tell me the best place to go to on weekends in your neighborhood？ How often do you go there？ And why do you like it？ Look forward to your reply.

Yours， Jim

Dear Jim，

Yours， Li Ping 【分析】【高分句型一】

I think the care center is the best place to go on weekends in our neighborhood. 我认为护理中心是我们社区周末最好的去处。 I think+宾语从句。

the best place to do sth做某事的最好地方。 【高分句型二】

I chat with old people about their lives. 我和老人谈论他们的生活。 chat with和……聊天。 【解答】Dear Jim，

I can't wait to see you here. There are many things you can do in your free time.（点题） I think the care center is the best place to go on weekends in our neighborhood. 【高分句型一】I go there once a week. I go to the care center to help people in need. I teach children reading skills and drawing. I chat with old people about their lives. 【高分句型二】I feel happy to do something for others. I hope you will enjoy it too.（介绍空闲时间的活动） Looking forward to your reply!（期待）

Yours， Li Ping 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

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2．我们都热爱自己的母校，为自己是其中一员而自豪．但也许它在校园环境、课业负担、校服式样、课外活动、作息时间等诸多方面并不尽如人意．请你写一篇短文，谈谈母校存在的问题并提出合理化建议． 写作要求：

1．问题和建议至少两条 2．不必自拟标题

3．文中不得出现真实人名和地名 4．词数不少于80．

I love my school，I‘m proud of studying at the school．But I think there are some problems．As we known，nowadays more and more attention is paid to campus safety，including bicycle theft，traffic accidents and students' getting injured in school．It is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the happiness of millions of families．How to protect us students？

There are several ways．First，we should raise our safety awareness﹣﹣﹣to take care of ourselves in school．Second，traffic regulations must be observed．Besides，we should be more careful in taking physical exercise．Last but not least，we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students．We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight． All teachers and students should make joint efforts to create a safe campus environment． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】

Last but not least，we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students最后也是最重要的，当我们和其他学生有不快的时候我们应该一直保持冷静．

when having trouble with other students＝when we have a trouble with other students省略句的使用． 【高分句型二】

We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight我们应该通过交流沟通解决问题而不是吵架． rather than 而不是

【解答】I love my school，I‘m proud of studying at the school．But I think there are some problems．As we known，nowadays more and more attention is paid to campus safety，including bicycle theft，traffic accidents and students' getting injured in school．It is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the happiness of millions of families．（问题） How to protect us students？

There are several ways．First，we should raise our safety awareness﹣﹣﹣to take care of ourselves in school．Second，traffic regulations must be observed．Besides，we should be more careful in taking physical exercise．Last but not least，we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students．【高分句型一】We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight．【高分句型二】（建议）

All teachers and students should make joint efforts to create a safe campus environment．

【点评】写作时要注意一些几点：

（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点． （2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康． （3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题．

（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．

3．假如你是李华，你们学校国际部携手所在街道推出\"冬奥英语进社区\"的活动，现面向全校学生招募英语志愿者，利用假期为社区居民进行英语培训。请你用英语写一封申请信，说明你具备哪些优势，以及你为什么想要申请成为志愿者。

提示词语：be good at，experience，communicate，outgoing，make a difference 提示问题：

•What qualifications（素质）do you have for the volunteer work？ •Why would you like to be a volunteer？ Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm writing to apply to become a volunteer in the program. . I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours， Li Hua

【分析】【高分句型一】

I have read the requirements you have listed，and I am confident that I have the qualification of serving as a volunteer.我已经阅读了你列出的要求，我相信我有资格成为一名志愿者。表语从句

【高分句型二】

Besides，I am good at communication and helpful.另外，我善于沟通，乐于助人。be good at擅长

【解答】Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm writing to apply to become a volunteer in the program.I have read the requirements you have listed，and I am confident that I have the qualification of serving as a volunteer.【高分句型一】 I have studied English for ten years and I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.Besides，I am good at communication and helpful.【高分句型二】（优势）So I have the ability to teach them some common English.Helping others makes me feel happy.（原因） If I am considered qualified for being the volunteer，I will value it and do all I can to make a contribution to our community.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours， Li Hua

【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。

4．请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于40词的文段写作。文中已给出内容，不计入

总词数。所给图片及提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国传统节日如春节（Spring Festival） 和中秋节（Mid﹣Autumn Festival）等非常感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的中国传统节日。内容包括：你最喜欢的中国节日是什么，节日期间你通常会做哪些事情，以及你喜欢这个节日的理由。 提示问题：

•What's your favorite Chinese festival？ •What do you usually do at the festival？ •Why is it your favourite festival？

Dear Mike， How is it going？

I would like to tell you about my favorite Chinese festival. . If you want to know more，please tell me.

Yours， Li Hua 【分析】【高分句型一】

I'm very glad to tell you something about Spring Festival.我很高兴告诉你一些关于春节的事情。

be glad to do sth高兴做某事。 【高分句型二】

I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes.我总是帮助我的妈妈擦窗户和洗衣服。

help sb do sth帮助某人做某事。 【解答】Dear Mike， How is it going？

I would like to tell you about my favorite Chinese festival.（点题）

My favorite Chinese festival is Spring Festival. （最喜欢春节）It's a traditional festival in China.It usually comes on January 1st every year.We usually clean our house carefully before it comes.I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes.【高分句型二】I can get a hongbao from my parents.We put on Spring Festival couplets on the door.On the eve of the Spring Festival，we get together to have a family dinner.The next morning，we visit our relatives and friends and say \"Happy New Year\" to each other.（如何过春节） If you want to know more，please tell me.

Yours， Li Hua 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

5．假如你是李华，你美国的朋友Tom 在寒假打算学习中文．请你根据他提出的问题给出一些学习建议．要求，50个词左右．

提示词语：practice，listen，speak，China，computer，easily

Dear Tom，

I am glad that you want to study Chinese．

I think Chinese is more difficult to learn than English． But I have some advice on language learning for you．If you couldn't find native speakers around you，there are some great computer programs that will help you learn to speak and listen to Chinese．It is very important to listen and practice speaking for language learner．Why don't you come to China during your winter holiday？1 think there are some very good tourist guide books you can carry around with you．I believe that it will help you learn Chinese quickly and easily． I hope this helps you and see you next time in Beijing． Best wishes，

Yours， Li Hua．

【分析】高分句型：

It is very important to listen and practice speaking for language learner．对于语言学习者来说，听和练习说是非常重要的．这里It is very important to do sth表示做某事很重要． I hope this helps you and see you next time in Beijing．我希望这能帮助你并且下次在北京能见

到你．这里hope后面跟一个宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Tom，

I am glad that you want to study Chinese．I think Chinese is more difficult to learn than English．（引出话题）

But I have some advice on language learning for you．If you couldn't find native speakers around you，there are some great computer programs that will help you learn to speak and listen to Chinese．It is very important to listen and practice speaking for language learner（高分句型）．Why don't you come to China during your winter holiday？1 think there are some very good tourist guide books you can carry around with you．I believe that it will help you learn Chinese quickly and easily．（学习中文的建议）

I hope this helps you and see you next time in Beijing．（高分句型）（我的希望） Best wishes，

Yours， Li Hua

【点评】做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．日常学习中，注意多背诵范文，熟记一些经典句型，考试时就能有所参照，有的放矢．

6．春节是中国重要的传统节日，某英文报纸正以\" Our Traditional Festival﹣the Spring Festival\"为题征文．请你投稿，介绍中国人如何庆祝春节，以及你最喜欢的庆祝活动．（不少于40 词，所给图片和提示词语仅供选用） What do people do to celebrate the Spring Festival in China？

Our Traditional Festival﹣the Spring Festival 【分析】高分句型一

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语the most important festival \"最重要的节日\"，短语in China \"在中国\"，此句可翻译为\"春节在中国是最重要的节日．\"

高分句型二

In many places people like to set off firecrackers．

放鞭炮．此句是一般现在时的一般陈述句．运用短语like to do sth \"喜欢做某事\"，短语set off\"点燃、放\"，此句可翻译为\"在许多地方人们喜欢放鞭炮．\" 高分句型三

This money is given to children for good luck．

此句是一般现在时的被动语态的陈述句．运用短语good luck\"好运\"，此句可翻译为\"这钱是给孩子们的，以祝他们好运\" 高分句型四

People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语put …up …\"把…挂在…上\"，此句可翻译为\"人们把新年卷轴挂在墙上，祈求好运．\" 高分句型五

The Spring Festival would be finished at the Lantern Festival in two weeks．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语at Lantern Festival \"在元宵节\"，运用短语in two weeks\"两周之后\"，此句可翻译为\"春节将在2个星期以后的元宵节后结束．\" 高分句型六

It could take people good luck all the year round．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句，运用could +do（原形）是表示句子的语气更委婉．运用短语all the year round \"一整年\"，此句可翻译为\"它可以给人们一整年带来好运．\" 【解答】Our Traditional Festival﹣the Spring Festival

Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．【高分句型一】（要点一，春节是中国最重要的节日．）It's to celebrate the lunar calendar ‘s new year．它是为了庆祝农历新年．Because of celebrating

the Spring Festival，People do a lot of things ，They clean the house，hang the red lanterns and make

dumplings．They buy a lot of food．（要点二，为庆祝节日，人们做的很多事情．）In the evening before the Spring Festival ，families get together and have a big meal．In many places people like to set off firecrackers．【高分句型二】Dumplings are the most traditional food．（要点三，春节期间人们在一起吃年夜饭、放鞭炮．）Children like the festival very much ，because they can have delicious food and wear new

clothes．They can also get some money from their parents．This money is given to children for good luck．【高分句型三】（要点四，孩子春节期间喜欢做的事情．）People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune．【高分句型四】Everybody watches TV and chats．They watch a dragon dance．In the midnight，family members usually decorate the doors and windows by pasting up red papercuts，because red means good luck．（要点五，春节是人们所做的事情能够带来好运．）它们The Spring Festival would be finished at the Lantern Festival in two weeks．【高分句型五】People often eat a kind of rice dumpling called yuanxiao．It could take people good luck all the year round．【高分句型六】（要点六，元宵

节吃元宵给人们全年带来好运．）

【点评】本题是图画作文，能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕所供图画内容，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

7．假如你叫Mary，计划在暑假期间参加一个英语夏令营．下面的广告比较符合你的需求，请写一封信提出申请并咨询相关情况．

注意：1．信中应该包括你选择的课程及原因、上课时间，以及其他想要询问的信息，可适当发挥；

2．词数80词左右．开头已经给出（不计入总词数），你只需要接着写．

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am Mary．I'm planning to attend a Summer English Camp during the vacation． As for my choice between the two courses，I prefer to choose Course One which will take 10 days from July 1st to July 10th．First，I believe my English will be greatly improved through this course．Second，my friends also have interests in it．It would be better if we can study with the help of each other．Finally，I want to learn

some knowledge about painting，especially Chinese painting because I am going to join the painting club next term．

By the way，would you mind telling me some more information about the service and activities mentioned in the advertisement？ I'm really looking forward to your reply．

Sincerely，

Mary

【分析】高分句型一

I believe my English will be greatly improved through this course．此句是复合句，believe后跟宾语从句．运用短语be greatly improved \"被大大地提高\" 此句运用一般将来时的被动语态．此句可译为 \"我相信我的英语会通过这门课程的学习将被大大地提高\"． 高分句型二

It would be better if we can study with the help of each other．此句是复合句，以if引起的条件状语从句．运用短语with the help of \"在…的帮助下\"，each other\"互相，彼此\"，此句可译为\"如果我们能在互相帮助下学习，那就更好了．\" 【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，

I am Mary．I'm planning to attend a Summer English Camp during the vacation．（ 要点一，简单自我介绍．）

As for my choice between the two courses，I prefer to choose Course One which will take 10 days from July 1st to July 10th．First，I believe my English will be greatly improved through this course．（高分句型一） Second，my friends also have interests in it．It would be better if we can study with the help of each other．（高分句型二） Finally，I want to learn some knowledge about painting，especially Chinese painting because I am going to join the painting

club next term． （要点二，选择课程的原因．）

By the way，would you mind telling me some more information about the service and activities mentioned in the advertisement？（ 要点三，请求帮助．） I'm really looking forward to your reply．

Sincerely，

Mary

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．注意一些复合句的运用及短语的运用．

8．某英文杂志正在举办以\"My Favorite...\" 为主题的征文活动．请根据以下问题提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的一件物品（如书籍、CD、玩具等）． （1）How long have you had it？ （2）How did you get it？

（3）Why do you like it？Why is it special？ （4）Can you say anything more about it？ 注意（1）词数80左右．

（2）文章必须包括四个问题的相关内容，也可适当增加信息．

My Favorite________

【分析】【高分句型一】

I think she is good at describing the magic world．我认为她擅长描述神奇的世界． I think+宾语从句；be good at擅长… 【高分句型二】

If you also like magic stories，do not miss it!如果你也喜欢魔法故事，不要错过它! if引导条件状语从句． 【解答】My Favorite Book

My favorite book is Harry Potter．I have had it for five years．（拥有多久了） It was a birthday gift from my mother．（如何得到的） She knew I really love such kind of stories．It was written by J．K．Rowling．I think she is good at describing the magic world．【高分句型一】It is about a boy called Harry and his adventures at Hogwarts．It shows us the importance of friendship and courage．I fell in love with the book as soon as I started reading it．（喜欢的原因及它的特别之处） If you also like magic stories，do not miss it!（推荐这本书）【高分句型二】

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

9．假如你是李君，请你先阅读新西兰笔友Bob 的邮件并进行回复， To：Li Jun From：Bob Hi Li Jun，

How is it going？I'm glad to tell you I have a good friend now.She is outgoing and friendly.She often gives me a lot of help.What about your friend？Could you tell me something about your school life？

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishes!

.

Bob

【分析】【高分句型一】

Fanny is good at all his subjects.范妮擅长他所有的科目。 be good at擅长…… 【高分句型二】

Let me tell you something about my school life.让我告诉你一些关于我的学校生活。 let sb do sth让某人做某事。 【解答】Dear Bob，

I'm glad to receive your letter.In my class，there is a girl.She has a round face and two big eyes.Her hair is short and black.She is tall and beautiful.She is Fanny，one of my good friends.Fanny is good at all his subjects.【高分句型一】In class，she listens to the teachers carefully.She studies English very well.She often helps us to solve problems.She is very quiet，sometimes she is very active.（朋友）

Let me tell you something about my school life. 【高分句型二】Classes begin at 8：00 am.I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon.We also have lots of after﹣school activities.I'm interested in computer science and I often go to the computer group in our school.I like my colorful and interesting school life.（学校生活）

Yours， Li Jun

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

10．在今年4月23日第20个\"世界阅读日\"之际，我市进行了以\"爱上悦读\"为主题的阅读交流活动．请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文，分享你们学校的一些做法． 要点：

1．学校举行图书展，一年两次，向国学们介绍优秀文学作品； 2．各个班级设立图书角，同学们可以自由交换书籍； 3．每天下午通过广播进行15分钟的\"听书\"活动； 4．每学期每人至少阅读5本好书，并撰写一篇读书心得． 注意：

1．词数：80词左右，开头与结尾已写出，不计入总词数； 2．内容必须包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥；

3．参考词汇：literature；set up；exchange（v．交换）；broadcast（n．广播）；reading report

It's said that reading makes a full man．Here are some ways in our school to make reading

more fun． ．

Through these activities，we really love reading now．

【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．介绍学校在图书阅读交流方面的活动，时态以一般现在时为主；人称主要为第三人称．

写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从四个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：

1．学校举行图书展，一年两次，向国学们介绍优秀文学作品； 2．各个班级设立图书角，同学们可以自由交换书籍； 3．每天下午通过广播进行15分钟的\"听书\"活动； 4．每学期每人至少阅读5本好书，并撰写一篇读书心得． 重点短语： twice a year 每年两次

great literature works 优秀的文学作品 set up设立

exchange books 交换书籍 at least 至少 高分句型：

1．Book shows are held twice a year in our school． 我们学校每年举行两次图书展．

一般现在时的被动语态：主语+am/is/are+动词的过去分词；twice a year 一年两次 2．It helps us exchange some books with others freely there．它帮我们在那里自由交换书籍． help sb．do sth．帮助某人做某事

3．Each student must read at least five good books a term and write a reading report from what he/she has read．

每学期每人至少阅读5本好书，并从他读的内容当中撰写一篇读书心得．

这是一个由and连接的两个并列句；情态动词must\"必须\"，后面跟动词原形；what he/she has read在句子中作宾语从句，意思是\"所读的内容\"；write a reading report from what he/she has read从他读的内容当中撰写一篇读书心得 【解答】Reading activities in our school

It's said that reading makes a full man（高分句型）．Here are some ways in our school to make reading more fun．Book shows are held twice a year in our school（高分句型）．They can introduce some great literature works to us students．（举行图书展，介绍优秀文学作品）A book comer is set up in every classroom．It helps us exchange some books with others freely there（高分句型）（设立图书角，自由交换书籍）．And at the same time，we have a 15 minutes' listening books by broadcast every afternoon．It brings us lots of fun indeed（\"听\"书活动）．Our school also has a rule：each student must read at least five good books a term and write a reading report from what he/she has read（至少读五本书，写读书体会）． Through these activities，we really love reading now．

【点评】提纲作文注意：

1．仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点．

2．提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，

按照一定逻辑关系来写．

3．根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯．

11．为了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网希望对杭州茶文化进行宣传．请你根据表格信息，用英语为其写一篇介绍，词数80左右． What is Longjing Tea famous for？ What is it used for？ How is it produced？

What's the best place to learn about it？ Why？ Longjing Tea

【分析】【高分句型一】

Longjing tea is a symbol of Hangzhou．龙井茶是杭州的一个象征． a symbol of ……的象征． 【高分句型二】

The best place to learn about it is Hangzhou National Tea Museum．了解它最好的地方是杭州国家茶博物馆．

The best place to do sth做某事的最佳地方． 【解答】Longjing Tea

Hangzhou is a beautiful city．Longjing tea is a symbol of Hangzhou．【高分句型一】It is famous for its good taste．（龙井茶因为什么出名） It is popular with people because drinking Longjing Tea can keep people healthy． （保健功能）Longjing Tea is planted on the sides of mountains and picked every spring． （种植）The best place to learn about it is Hangzhou National Tea Museum．【高分句型二】Because in the museum，we can not only see many kinds of tea，but also learn tea culture．（了解龙井茶的最好地方及原因） Welcome to Hangzhou to taste Longjing Tea．（发出邀请）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

Good taste Keep healthy

Grow on the sides of mountains … Hangzhou National Tea Museum …

12．题目②

初中三年的学校生活即将成为美好的回忆．回首三年时光，你有哪些收获？即将毕业，你有什么感受？

假如你是李华，你校英文校刊邀请你写一篇短文谈谈毕业之际的感想，内容包括你三年学校生活的收获以及你即将毕业的感受． 提示词语： knowledge， friend， memory， happy

提示问题：●What have you got during the past three years？ ●How do you feel upon graduation？ ．

【分析】【高分句型一】

I used to be shy and had few friends．我过去很害羞，几乎没有朋友． used to do sth过去常常做某事． 【高分句型二】

With the help of my English teacher， I have made great progress in English． With the help of 在……的帮助下． make great progress取得很大的进步．

【解答】Three years of junior high school life will soon become a happy memory． In the past three years， I have changed a lot． I used to be shy and had few friends．【高分句型一】But now I am happy and outgoing．Gradually，I made some good friends． I used to dislike reading， but now I like reading very much． With the help of my English teacher， I have made great progress in English．【高分句型二】（我的收获）

Now， I am very sad to leave my teachers and classmates．I think I'll miss them．I hope they will be better in the future．（感受）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

13．交换生Thomas想去太子湾赏花．但是由于受新冠肺炎（NCP ）的影响，需做好下列事项．假如你是李华，请你给Thomas写一封邮件告知． ♦全程佩戴口罩（mask）；

♦入园前需网 上预约（book online）；

♦入园时出示身份证和杭州健康码（Hangzhou QR code ），并配合测量体温； ♦开放时间：工作日8：00﹣16：00；双休日8：00﹣ 17：00． 要求：

1．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数． 2．邮件需包含所有要点，并根据主题作适当发挥． 3．文中不得出现学校和个人的真实信息． To：Thomas From：Li Hua Subject：Rules Hi Thomas，

Warmly welcome for your visit to Taiziwan Park．But because of the NCP，you should pay attention to the following rules： _______． Linda

【分析】【高分句型一】

You need to book online in advance so that the organizer can arrange the visit properly．你需要提前在网上预订，这样组织者才能妥善安排参观． need to do sth需要做某事． so that引导目的状语从句． 【高分句型二】

If your temperature is too high，you won't be able to enter the park．如果你的体温太高，你就不能进入公园． if引导条件状语从句． 【解答】Hi Thomas，

Warmly welcome for your visit to Taiziwan Park．But because of the NCP，you should pay attention to the following rules．（点题）

Be sure to wear a mask throughout the visit．This will keep you away from the virus．You need to book online in advance so that the organizer can arrange the visit properly．【高分句型一】When you enter the park，remember to show your ID card and Hangzhou QR code．You must cooperate with the staff to take your temperature．If your temperature is too high，you won't be able to enter the park．【高分句型二】Also，make sure you don't forget the park opening hours．On weekdays，it opens from 8：00﹣16：00．On weekends，it opens from 8：00﹣17：00．（注意事项）

I hope you enjoy yourself．（希望） Linda

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

14．假设你叫李华，是英国中学生彼得的笔友，你收到了他的来信．请给彼得写一封回信，回答他的有关压岁钱（lucky money）的问题，提出你的建议．

Hi!Li Hua，

I am living in Chengdu now．I was very lucky that I spent the Spring Festival with my host family．It was surprising and interesting that I received lucky money in the red paper from my host parents．Did you get lucky money this year？How do you

usually spend it？And what can I do with the money？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．

Yours， Peter

Hi!Peter，

I'm glad to know you are having a good time in Chengdu． The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．Giving lucky money to children is a custom．I get lucky money every year．I will put most of it inthe bank，and spend the rest on some books．This year，I also got lucky money．With it，I bought some school things for several poor students in Ningxia． For you，I think it's a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your host family before you leave China．You can also buy some Chinese gifts for your parents and friends in England．Or，just keep it as good memories．

I hope what I said can help you．

Yours， Li Hua

【分析】高分句型一：

For you，I think①②it's a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your host family③before you leave China．对于你，我认为你离开中国之前用压岁钱为你的寄宿家庭买一件礼物，这是一个好主意．

①think后跟省略了that引导词的宾语从句

②It+be+（for sb）to do sth（对某人来说）做某事是…的，it为形式主语，不定式为真正主语．

③before引导的时间状语从句 高分句型二：

I hope①what I said can help you．我希望我说的可以帮助你． ①what引导的宾语从句，作hope的宾语 【解答】One possible version： Hi!Peter，

I'm glad to know you are having a good time in Chengdu．

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．Giving lucky money to children is a custom．I get lucky money every year．I will put most of it in the bank，and spend the rest on some books．This year，I also got lucky money．With it，I bought some school things for several poor students in Ningxia．【今年获得了压岁钱及如何花】

For you，I think it's a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your host family before you leave China．【高分句型一】You can also buy some Chinese gifts for your parents and friends in England．Or，just keep it as good memories．【给出建议】 I hope what I said can help you．【高分句型二】 Yours， Li Hua

【点评】考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．

15．假定你是李平，请写信给你的美国朋友Peter，邀请他参加你学校为期两天的活动，内容需包含所列所有问题，并作适当拓展．词数：70个左右． What activities do you have in your school？ What you do in the activities？ When are the activities？

What do you think of the activities？ 要求：

1．恰当使用连词but、and，so等； 2．请关注全文结构的完整性； 3．信中不得出现真实的学校名称． _____________________．

Yours Li Ping

【分析】【高分句型一】

And we are interested in the life of American middle school students． 我们对美国中学生的生活很感兴趣．be interested in 对……感兴趣． 【高分句型二】

I think this activity is useful， so we must prepare for it carefully．

我认为这个活动是有用的，所以我们必须认真准备．I think+宾语从句．so引导结果状语从句．

【解答】Dear Peter，

I'd like to invite you to come to our \"English corner\" to talk about something about middle school students in America．（什么活动）

We will hold the English corner from this Saturday to Sunday．（时间） And we are interested in the life of American middle school students．【高分句型一】 So would you please come to our \"English Corner\" to give us a lecture about this topic？ I will be the host in this activity．（我在活动中做什么） I think this activity is useful， so we must prepare for it carefully．【高分句型二】（我的评价） Looking forward to your reply．（期待） Yours Li Ping

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

16．假如你是李平，你的朋友John在给你的e﹣mail中提到不久将来中国旅行，请根据John的书信内容回复．次数：80个左右． From ：John Hi Li Ping，

Long time no see!It has been ten years since I came to China last time．I remember that you lived in Building 10．Changhe Avenue with a small river in front in Lantian City．Do you still live there？We went for trips together by bus or by bike at that time．Taxi was very expensive．Shopping in the stores was crowded．You've mentioned great changes in your letter．Can you tell me the changes around？Hope to hear from you soon． All the best

John

To John，

Subject：Changes in Lantian City，China Hi John，

Very glad to know that you are coming to China soon．As you can see，there have bee many changes in the past ten years in Lantian City in China． 【分析】高分句型一：

During the recent years，a large number of comfortable buildings have been built，which attracted more people to live here．

近年来，大量的舒适楼房已经建成，吸引了更多的人住在这里．have been built已经建成，现在完成时的被动语态，which attracted more people to live here．吸引了更多的人住在这里．本句使用了非限制性定语从句， 高分句型二：

It is convenient to reach here by subway，which is faster than bus and less expensive than taxi． 乘地铁到这里很方便，比公共汽车快，比出租车便宜．It is +adj +to do sth ，it作形式主语，which is faster than bus and less expensive than taxi．比公共汽车快，比出租车便宜，本句使用了非限制性定语从句， 【解答】Hi John，

Very glad to know that you are coming to China soon．As you can see，there have been many changes in the past ten years in Lantian City in China．开篇点题）

During the recent years，a large number of comfortable buildings have been built，which attracted more people to live here． 【高分句型一】There are more tress and flowers than before．The environment is becoming better and better．（城市的变化）My family moved into an apartment in Lanhe Garden，located in Lanhe Avenue．（搬家后的住址） It is convenient to reach here by subway，which is faster than bus and less expensive than taxi． 【高分句型二】交通更方便）Nowadays，more and more people prefer shopping online，which made shopping in stores less popular．Therefore，if you want to go shopping，don't worry about the crowds．（越来越多的人喜欢网上购物，不担心拥挤的人群） I'm looking forward to meeting you soon． Yours， Li Ping

【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

17．假如你是王敏，即将毕业于Hangzhou No.1 Middle School．请你写一封信回复加拿大国际高中Toronto International School （TIS）的招生广告．信中包含你想就读的原因，突出你的优势和特色．

WANTED

Active，creative，communicative and meaningful subjects are waiting for you! We have native English teachers with rich teaching experience for over 200． ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣ Open﹣﹣Minded Learning Area﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣

﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣

Of course，your interest，confidence，imaginations，special（特长）and your kindness are

greatly needed and available! Write to Professor Nail right now!!

词数：80个左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

参考词汇：study abroad，be interested in，get an opportunity，learn a lot about，Although…，make an effort to … Dear Professor Nail， ______

I am looking forward to your kind reply． Yours sincerely， Wang Min

【分析】【高分句型一】

I am interested in Chinese，English and music as well．我对汉语、英语和音乐也感兴趣． be interested in对…感兴趣． 【高分句型二】

Although I am not the best now，I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me．虽然我现在不是最好的，我将尽一切努力成为一名优等生，我相信你会为我感到骄傲． although不能和but同时出现． make an effort to do sth努力做某事． I believe+宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Professor Nail，

I am Wang Min from Hangzhou No.1 Middle School．I wish to get an opportunity to study at TIS．（点题）

Like many other boys，I enjoy doing sports．Maths and science are my favourite subjects．I am interested in Chinese，English and music as well． 【高分句型一】（爱好和特长）I have won several prizes in various competitions，including a second prize in an international maths competition．（取得的成就）

I have studied the programme for one month and I learnt a lot about American culture and made many friends there．So TIS is my first choice to study abroad．（准备工作）

Although I am not the best now，I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me．（自信）【高分句型二】 I am looking forward to your kind reply．（期待） Yours sincerely，

Wang Min

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

18．仔细观察图中乘客在公交车上的举止，参考所提供的短语写一篇短文．

talk loudly on the phone，smoke on the bus，drop litter，stand close to each other，be not allowed，feel uncomfortable，It is better to…，social behavior，…

提示：

1．短文内容包括对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述和你的建议四条． 2．词数80个左右．短文开头已写好，不计入总词数． 3．文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息．

Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56 bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）is talking on the phone loudly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．I think everyone should obey the bus regulations，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．It is better not to talk loudly，or others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．

【分析】高分句型一

I think everyone should obey the bus regulations．我认为每个人都应该遵守公车管理规定．I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句． 高分句型二

it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．在公共汽车上是不允许抽烟的．it is not allowed to do sth．不允许做某事．

【解答】Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56 bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）is talking on the phone loudly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．【要点一，对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述】I think everyone

should obey the bus regulations【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus【高分句型二，注意固定句型的使用】．It is better not to talk loudly，or others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．【要点二，建议】

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．

19．假如你是李平（ E﹣mail：liping2002@163 com），亚运会将在你所居住的杭州举办，现组委会向全市中学生发出一封邀请函招募志愿者，请阅读后进行自荐回复。 From：Asia Games Organizing Committee（亚运会组委会） Dear students

We are now in great need of volunteers for the coming Asian Games，please send us your personal information including your name，gender（性别），age，hobbies，E﹣mail address and so on.

Also，in order to provide the best service for the athletes in the games，what kind of language can you speak？What can you do for them in Hangzhou？

We welcome your application and look forward to you becoming part of our members！ Best Wishes！

Asia Games Organizing Committee

要求：

1.回复邮件必须包含邀请函中的要点问题，并可适当增加，使行文通顺、连贯； 2.回复邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名； 3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。 To：Asia Games Organizing Committee Subject：Application for a volunteer

Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Ping.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Games in Hangzhou. __________________ Hope you can choose me！

Yours， Li Ping

【分析】【高分句型一】

As a middle student，I am interested in sports and can speak English fluently.作为一名中学生，我对运动很感兴趣，英语也很流利。 be interested in对……感兴趣。 【高分句型二】

If you are interested in me，please email me atliping2002@163.com.如果你对我感兴趣，请发邮件到liping2002@1 63.com.

if引导条件状语从句。 【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Ping.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Games in Hangzhou.（点题）

I'm a girl of 16.As a middle student，I am interested in sports and can speak English fluently. 【高分句型一】So I suppose I'm qualified to be a volunteer for the Games.Besides，I have a good communicative skill and I'm considered to be an outgoing and helpful person at school.What's more，I'm familiar with the traffic transportation，the local food and so on.（要求） I'm sure I can also offer the best service to the athletes in the Games in Hangzhou.If you are interested in me，please email me atliping2002@163.com.【高分句型二】（联系方式） Hope you can choose me！

Yours， Li Ping

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

20．假如你是Zhao Lei， 你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法．请根据下表要点提示， 用英语写一封回信．

Advice on Learning Chinese 1． Chinese class， study Chinese characters（汉字）

2． watch Chinese TV programs， read Chinese books， newspapers， magazines and so on． 3．… 4．…

要求：1． 回信必须包含表内要点， 并另增加两条建议， 使文章通顺、连贯： 2． 回信不得使用真实的人名、校名；

3．词数80左右， 开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）． Dear Dave，

I'm glad to hear from you． You asked me about how to learn Chinese well． Here is my advice．

_________________________________________________________________． I hope you can learn Chinese well． 【分析】【高分句型一】

And the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible．

最重要的是记住尽可能多的汉字．the most important thing is to do sth．最重要的是做某事，动词不定式作表语；as…as possible尽可能……的． 【高分句型二】

Third， singing or listening to Chinese songs helps you learn more Chinese words as well． 第三，唱或听中文歌曲也有助于你学习更多的中文．动名词短语singing or listening to Chinese songs 作主语；as well也．

【解答】Dear Dave，

I'm glad to hear from you． You asked me about how to learn Chinese well． Here is my advice．

First， as a foreigner， you need to join a Chinese learning activity group，you can learn Chinese characters from your teachers and practice it with classmates． And the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible．【高分句型一】（参加汉语学习活动小组，记住尽可能多的汉字．）

Second， you'd better read Chinese books， newspapers and magazines．You can also watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs．（阅读中文书报杂志，看中国的电视节目或DVD） Third， singing or listening to Chinese songs helps you learn more Chinese words as well．【高分句型二】（唱或听中文歌曲）

Finally， you can make some Chinese friends． Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you，too． You can learn more about China．（结交一些中国朋友）

I hope you can learn Chinese well．（希望） Yours， Zhao Lei

【点评】这是一篇图表作文，题目要求就学习汉语的方法提建议． 在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡，如题中的first，second等等；也要适当运用复合句和固定搭配给自己的作文增加亮点．

21．假定你是李平，计划暑假去伦敦旅游，互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确，请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况．

要求：（1）邮件内容必须包含图中所指的问题，但可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯． （2）词数80左右．开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数． （3）参考词汇：入场费﹣﹣entrance fee

Dear Sir/Madam，

I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London． I'm writing for more information about the two days' tour of London． Firstly，I'd like to know more about the fee．what's the price for students？Does it include the entrance fees for the places we will visit？What about lunch？Is it included？Or do I need to bring my own food？Secondly，could you please tell me the exact time I can expect to be back？I have something important to do on that day so I'd like to know it．Thirdly，I wonder if there will be any time for shopping．I really want to have a look at the big stores in London． Looking forward to your reply．

Yours Li Ping

【分析】【高分句型一】

Secondly，could you please tell me the exact time I can expect to be back？其次，你能告诉我预计回来的确切时间吗？

I can expect to be back是定语从句，修饰先行词time 【高分句型二】

I wonder if there will be any time for shopping．我想知道是否会有时间购物． I wonder+宾语从句；if引导宾语从句 【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，

I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London．（写信的目的）

Firstly，I'd like to know more about the fee．what's the price for students？Does it include the entrance fees for the places we will visit？What about lunch？Is it included？Or do I need to bring my own food？Secondly，could you please tell me the exact time I can expect to be back？【高分句型一】I have something important to do on that day so I'd like to know it．Thirdly，I wonder if there will be any time for shopping．【高分句型二】I really want to have a look at the big stores in London．（询问的要点） Looking forward to your reply．

Yours

Li Ping

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

22．为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）．生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，也要学会帮助他人．请你在网上给What would you do？本期节目留言，内容包括： 1．你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法； 2．说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例； 3．呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量． 作文要求：

1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名．

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右．作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数．

In the program，a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop． I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need． The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home．I tried my best to make her stop crying．When I knew she was lost，I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived．I found it pleasant to give others a hand．

In my opinion，we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others' help．I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy．As the saying goes，\"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．\" ．

【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈生活中的正能量，呼吁大家互帮互助．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法； 2．说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例； 3．呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量． 常用到的重点短语：

adj+enough to do sth 足够怎样做某事 in need在危急中

on one's way to…去某地的路上 try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事 stop doing sth 停止做某事 help sb do sth帮某人做某事 give sb a hand帮助某人 be supposed to应该 【高分句型】

1．I really admire her①because she was②brave enough to help the woman③in need． ①because引导的原因状语从句． ②adj+enough to do sth 足够怎样做某事． ③in need作为后置定语，修饰the woman． 2．I found①it pleasant to ②give others a hand． ①it是形式宾语，动词不定式是真正宾语． ②give sb a hand帮助某人．

【解答】In the program，a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop．I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need．【高分句型】（你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法）

The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home．I tried my best to make her stop crying．When I knew she was lost，I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived．I found it pleasant to give others a hand．【高分句型】（你帮助别人的一件事例）

In my opinion，we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others' help．I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy．As the saying goes，\"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．\"（呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量） 【点评】提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．

23．假如你是李华，最近学校开展\"全民阅读进校园\"读书活动，你和你的同学在课余时间看了许多书．请你根据表格的提示，以演讲的形式分享你最喜欢的一个故事并发表感想．

故事名称 作者 故事内容

The Gifts 美国作家0． Henry 人物：Della & Jim 时间：on Christmas Eve

事件：卖掉自己为之自豪的物品﹣﹣美丽的头发和金表 购买圣诞节礼物 表链和套发梳

得到了更有价值的东西﹣﹣爱

读后感想 读书活动的益处

注意：

（1）参考词汇： gold watch， beautiful hair，a watch chain，a set of combs （2）请适当拓展，不能直译内容；

（3）词数左右（文章开头及结尾已给出，不计入词数）； （4）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分． 【分析】【高分句型一】

It told us a story that a couple Della and Jim bought gifts each other．

它给我们讲述了德拉和吉姆夫妇互相买礼物的一个故事．that引导定语从句． 【高分句型二】

There are many beautiful words in the book， which makes us enjoy the beauty of the world． 文章中有许多优美词汇，这让我们享受到了世界的美丽．which引导非限制性定语从句． 【解答】Boys and girls ，today I introduce a story written by a famous American writer called O．Henry．（作者）It told us a story that a couple Della and Jim bought gifts each other．【高分句型一】 On Christmas Eve，They sold what they were proud of ﹣ beautiful hair and a gold watch． Della sold her beautiful hair to buy a watch chain for Jim and Jim sold his gold watch to buy a set of combs for Della．In the end， they got something more valuable ﹣﹣ love．（故事内容）

……（至少一点） ……（至少一点）

I am deeply moved by the great love between the couple．They both sold their treasures just to buy a gift for their lover．（感受）

Have a book and you will have a good time !There are many beautiful words in the book， which makes us enjoy the beauty of the world．【高分句型二】 （读书活动的益处）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

24．假如你是王林，你发现班上许多同学不重视课外阅读．请你根据下表提示，针对这个 问题进行阐述与分析，并提出\"读好书\"的建议． 读书的好处

读书的好处

●增长知识，了解世界

●学会思考 ●作业多 ●没读书习惯 ●花时间网络或游戏

如何读书的建议

建议 （至少一点）

不读书的原因

要求：（1）短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； （3）词数 80 ﹣100 左右． （开头已给出，不计入词数）

Reading is very important in our life． Reading has many benefits．Through reading we can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us think better．Last but not least，reading can make our life more colourful． At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．First of all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．

Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read．For another，it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other． 【分析】【高分句型一】

①Last but not least，②reading can ③make our life more colourful．最后也是最重要的是，阅读可以让我们的生活更加丰富多彩． ①last but not least最后也是最重要的 ②reading动名词作主语 ③make sth+adj 让…怎么样 【高分句型二】

①For one thing，teachers ②are supposed to limit the amount of our homework ③so that we can have more time ④to read．首先，老师应该限制我们的作业量，这样我们就可以有更多的时间去阅读．

①For one thing…For another…一方面…另一方面… ②be supposed to do sth 应该做某事

③so that引导的目的状语从句，也可以用in order that． ④动词不定式作为目的状语．

【解答】Reading is very important in our life．Reading has many benefits．Through reading we can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us think better．Last but not least，reading can make our life more colourful．【高分句型一】（读书的好处）

At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．First of all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．（不读书的原因）

Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read．【高分句型二】For another，it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other．（如何读书的建议）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

25．假如你是李涛，在美国夏令营活动中，你和来自不同国家的中学生交流了各自的职业梦想．现校刊向你约稿，请根据表格信息，给校刊主编回信．

name David（U．K．） Helen（ U．S．A）

Li Tao

注意：1．内容必须包括表格中的信息； 2．开头已经为你写好，你只需接着写；

3．词数：70个左右．开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词汇． Dear Editor，

I am writing to tell you about our dreams． ． Looking forward to your reply． Yours， Li Tao．

【分析】这是一篇图表作文．内容是介绍一下你和你的朋友David、Helen的职业梦想．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．David（U．K．）；艺术家；原因：有创造性，喜欢绘画

what artist shop assistant

…

why 1．creative 2．love painting 1．try on new clothes 2．meet different people

1．… 2．…．

2．Helen（ U．S．A）；商店售货员；原因：试穿新衣服，遇见不同的朋友 3．李涛的梦想和理由 常用到的重点短语： want to be 想成为 make+sth+adj 让某某怎样 try on 试穿 come from 来自

make sb do sth 让某人做某事 【高分句型】

1．David①from U．K．②wants to be an artist ③because he loves painting and④it's creative to⑤make the city more beautiful． ①介词短语做后置定语修饰David． ②want to be 想成为

③because引导的原因状语从句．

④it作为形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语． ⑤make+sth+adj 让某某怎样

2．She ①would like to be a shop assistant ②because she will enjoy the life③if she can often try on new clothes and meet different people． ①would like to be 想成为 ②because引导的原因状语从句．

③if引导的条件状语从句．遵循主将从现的规则．

3．I like playing computer games and ①doing programs can②make me feel③how smart I am． ①动名词短语做主语． ②make sb do sth 让某人做某事 ③how smart I am作为feel的宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Editor，

I am writing to tell you about our dreams．

David from U．K．wants to be an artist because he loves painting and it's creative to make the city more beautiful．【高分句型】（David（U．K．）；艺术家；有创造性，喜欢绘画）As for the American girl Helen，she has a very special dream．She would like to be a shop assistant because she will enjoy the life if she can often try on new clothes and meet different people．【高分句型】（Helen（ U．S．A）；商店售货员；试穿新衣服，遇见不同的朋友）

I come from China and I want to work as a programmer．I like playing computer games and doing programs can make me feel how smart I am．【高分句型】（我来自中国，程序员，喜欢电脑游戏）

Looking forward to your reply． Yours， Li Tao

【点评】此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题．写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数．另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依

26．班会课上要求每个同学介绍一下自己的好友情况，假如Millie 是你最好的朋友，请你根据信息表的内容完成介绍．字数在80左右．

基本情况 学习生活

短发，又高又苗条，就读于第12中学

∅ 喜欢她的所有课程； ∅ 课间，与好朋友们聊天；

∅ 周五下午不上课，和同学们去不同的俱乐部；

∅ 课外活动多样；有时上舞蹈课，有时去校图书馆看趣味书籍；

爱好

打排球，因为…（发挥 1 ﹣﹣﹣ 2 句）

Hi， everybody！Today I'd like to tell you something about my best friend， Millie．

That's all! Thank you! 【分析】【高分句型一】

She likes to chat with her good friends between classes．

此句是一般过去时的一般疑问句．运用短语like to do sth \"喜欢做某事\"指具体的喜欢，短语chat with sb \"和朋友聊天\"，此句可翻译为\"在课间，她喜欢与好朋友们聊天；\" 【高分句型二】

She thinks that playing volleyball not only exercises but also develops intelligence．

此句是一般现在时的宾语从句．句子that playing volleyball not only exercises but also develops intelligence．是动词think 的宾语．运用短语not only…but also …\"不仅…而且…\"．此句可翻译为\"她认为打排球不仅可以锻炼身体而且提高智力．\"

【解答】Hi，everybody！Today I'd like to tell you something about my best friend，Millie．Millie has short hair．She is tall and slim． She studies in No． 12 Middle School．．（要点一，介绍最好朋友的基本情况．）She likes all her classes． She likes to chat with her good friends between classes．（高分句型一）She does not have classes on Friday afternoons and goes to different clubs with her classmates．She has all kinds of extracurricular activities，

Sometimes she takes dance lessons， sometimes she goes to the school library to read interesting books． （要点二，介绍好朋友的学习生活．）Millie likes English and Chinese best．She hopes to be a writer in the future．In her free time，she likes playing volleyball． She thinks that playing volleyball not only exercises but also develops intelligence．．（高分句型二）It makes her smarter and better．（要点三，介绍好朋友的爱好及理想．）That's all!Thank you! 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

27．阳光中学一年一度的作文比赛又开始了，今年的主题是\"我的朋友\"，请写一篇短文介

绍你的好朋友David， 要点如下： 1．他短发戴眼镜．他来自美国； 2．他爱好很多，绘画出色；

3．他住得离学校很远，每天花半小时乘公交车去上学； 4．他最喜欢的学科是数学和地理．他经常帮助我学习数学； 5．空闲时间他喜欢……， 我们经常……． 注意：

1．短文须包括所给的内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．第5要点必须用1﹣2句话作适当发挥；

3．词数70个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数．

My friend

David is my good friend．__________________________． 【分析】高分句型一 He comes from the USA．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语come from \"来自\"，此句可翻译为\"他来自美国．\" 高分句型二

He often helps me with my Maths．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语help sb with sth \"在某方面帮助某人\"，此句可翻译为\"他经常帮助我学习数学．\" 【解答】My friend

David is my good friend． He has short hair． He wears glasses． He comes from the USA．（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍朋友的外貌及国籍．） He has a lot of hobbies． He is good at/does well in drawing． He lives far away from school． It takes him half an hour to go to school by bus．（要点二，介绍朋友的爱好及去学校的方式．）His favourite subjects are Maths and Geography． He often helps me with my Maths．（高分句型二） In his free time， he likes playing basketball， he often plays basketball with me after school．（要点三，介绍朋友最喜欢的科目及运动．）

【点评】本题是提纲作文，写作时能够根据提纲提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

28．假定你是李华，上个星期你的英国笔友Daniel给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你的家庭作业的情况，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复． To：Lihua@ china．com From：Daniel@ britain．com Subject：My homework Dear Lihua

I hear that Chinese students work hard and always have too much homework．Is that true？Would you please tell me something about your homework？

●How do you like your homework？And why？

●How much time do you spend on your homework every day？What homework do you do usually？

●What homework once impressed you most？And why？ ● What is your ideal homework？And why？ All the best， Daniel

注意：1．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear Daniel，

Thank you so much for your email．I'm very happy to tell you something about my homework． I think homework is of great importance to/for a student because homework is a good way to check or test what I have learned． /I can go over my lessons by doing different kinds of homework．I usually spend about more than two hours on my homework of different subjects，such as Chinese，Maths，English，Chemistry．I remember I spent two hours working together with my classmates to finish an English project．The special homework made me learn about teamwork．I also come to know everyone has their own advantage．I think the best homework is what can make me not only learn but also think．

What about your homework？Is it interesting or boring？I am looking forward to your reply． Best wishes， Li Hua

【分析】【高分句型一】

I think homework is of great importance for a student because homework is a good way to check or test what I have learned．我认为家庭作业对学生来说是非常重要的，因为家庭作业是检查或测试我所学到的东西的好方法．

I think+宾语从句；be of great importance 非常重要；because引导原因状语从句；a good way to do sth做某事的好方法；what 引导宾语从句 【高分句型二】

I can go over my lessons by doing different kinds of homework．我可以通过做不同种类的家庭作业来复习功课． by doing sth通过做某事． 【解答】Dear Daniel，

Thank you so much for your email．I'm very happy to tell you something about my homework．（引起下文）

I think homework is of great importance for a student because homework is a good way to check or test what I have learned．【高分句型一】I can go over my lessons by doing different kinds of homework．【高分句型二】I usually spend about more than two hours on my homework of different subjects，such as Chinese，Maths，English，Chemistry．I remember I spent two

hours working together with my classmates to finish an English project．The special homework made me learn about teamwork．I also come to know everyone has their own advantage．I think the best homework is what can make me not only learn but also think．（我的作业情况及学习经验）

What about your homework？Is it interesting or boring？I am looking forward to your reply．（期待回信） Best wishes， Li Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

29．报社正在征集关于初三学生英语学习经验的文章，请根据以下要点，写一篇征文稿． 要点：

1． 刚入学时学英语很费劲，有时无法正确拼写单词，语法了解的不多． 2． 无法振作，想放弃．

3． 后来每天练习说英语，经常复习学过的知识．

4． 已经取得了很大的进步，现在能够记住单词的正确发音． 5． 你的感悟…（适当发挥 1 ～ 2 句） 提示： 1． 90 词左右 2． 包括所有要点 3． 合理发挥

4． 文章流畅，字迹清晰 When I entered middle school， 【分析】【高分句型一】

When I entered middle school，I had great difficulty in learning English． 当我进入中学时，我在学习英语方面有很大的困难．when引导时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】

I believe if we can show great interest in learning English and keep trying， we can learn English well．

我相信如果我们能对学习英语表现出极大的兴趣并不断努力，我们就能学好英语．if引导原因状语从句．show great interest in 对……表现出极大的兴趣．

【解答】When I entered middle school，I had great difficulty in learning English．【高分句型一】 I couldn't remember English words and I couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class． I lost heart and wanted to give up．（ 刚入学时遇到的问题） Later， I asked my teachers and classmates for help． I kept on reading English， listened to my teacher carefully and spoke English as much as possible．（采取的措施）So far， I have made great progress in English．（取得的进步）

I believe if we can show great interest in learning English and keep trying， we can learn English

well．【高分句型二】（感受）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

30．Write a passage about an animal you like with around 60 words. Please tell us：

（1）what the animal is； （2）what it is like； （3）why you like it 【分析】【高分句型一】

It likes to eat carrots and other vegetables. 它喜欢吃胡萝卜和其他蔬菜。 lie to do sth喜欢做某事。 【高分句型二】

It is very lovely and beautiful. I like to play with it.它非常可爱和美丽。我喜欢玩它。 play with 同……一起玩。

【解答】I love many animals， such as dogs， cats， tigers， pandas， dolphins and so on. My favorite animal is rabbit.（最喜欢的动物是什么） It has a pair of long ears. Its eyes are red and its body is white. It has a short tail.（长相） It likes to eat carrots and other vegetables. 【高分句型一】It is very lovely and beautiful. I like to play with it.【高分句型二】（喜欢的原因） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

31．Everyone has his or her interests and hobbies.

Please write a short passage within 50 words about one of your hobbies and why you like it， .

【分析】【高分句型一】

Also，I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger． 此外，我参加各种体育活动来增强体质．in order to 为了，目的是 【高分句型二】

All in all，the more I exercise， the healthier I'll be．

总之，我锻炼得越多，我就越健康．the +比较级，the+比较级，越……越…… 【解答】

My hobby

My hobby is to play sports．Here are the reasons for taking part in sports．（开篇点题）I usually play sports when I feel tired after study． I just want to relax myself and have fun．（锻炼可以使人放松，有乐趣） Also，I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger．【高分句型一】（变得更强壮） What's more，I want to be slim and pretty by doing

sports．（变得漂亮）

All in all，the more I exercise， the healthier I'll be．【高分句型二】

【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数．

32．南京市政网上贴出了一张海报，评选幸福指数最高的社区．请阅读海报内容，写一份推荐信，介绍你所在的社区．

Looking for the happiest neighbourhood in Nanjing

We are looking for the happiest neighbourhood in Nanjing． Do you live in such a neighbourhood ？ What's it like？ What are your neighbours like？ Do you get along well with each other？ Are there any special activities in the community？ （ Please introduce at least 2 activities） How often do you take part in the activities？

If you like your neighbourhood， write to us!!! We are waiting for your letter!

注意：

1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3．词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数． Dear sir：

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing． 【分析】【高分句型一】

If somebody is in need ， we will give a hand to him． 如果有人需要帮助，我们会帮助他． if引导条件状语从句． 【高分句型二】

When we meet each other ， we will always say hello to one another．当我们见面时，我们总是互相打招呼．

when引导时间状语从句；say hello to sb向某人问好． 【解答】Dear sir ：

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing． （点题）Our neighbourhood is clean， beautiful ， civilized and harmonious．（环境） Our neighbours are friendly ， kind and helpful． If somebody is in need ， we will give a hand to him． 【高分句型一】We get along well with each other． When we meet each other ， we will always say hello to one another． 【高分句型二】（人们相处融洽）There are some activities in our community all the year around ， like playing balls，Square dance， playing chess ， the singing contest and so on． I often play basketball． （社区的活动）I love my neighbourhood． We live happily in the community．（我的感受）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

33．南京公益基金会（Nanjing C Foundation） 主要帮助社区老人、贫困学子、贫困小学图书馆等．为了帮助更多的人加入义工队伍，该组织拟举办公益人才培训班（Voluntary Worker Course）．

假设你是Sam，南京中学（Nanjing School）的一名初三学生，打算参加本期课程的学习． 请根据以上内容，用英语写一封申请函信，申请加入本期的培训课程．邮件内容必须包括：

你能参加公益活动的时间；＝2．你参加公益活动的原因；＝3．你能胜任什么类型的活动． 注意：

1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3．词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数． Dear Chairperson，

I would like to join Nanjing C Foundation to be a voluntary worker．

First，let me introduce myself．I am a Grade 9 student at Nanjing School．As a student，I am very busy，but I can do some voluntary work at weekends．I am free on Sunday afternoons．

I would like to join you because it is meaningful to help people in need．Just as the saying goes，\"Fragrance remains in the hand that gives roses．\"I will also be happy if I can be of some help to others．

I can help primary school students with their homework．I can also chat with the elderly and help them do some housework．

I will be very happy if I can be a member of you．You can email me at Sam@Nanjing School．com．

I will be very happy if I can be a member of you．You can email me at Sam@Nanjing School．com． Yours sincerely， Sam．

【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是写一封申请函信，申请加入公益人才培训班的培训课程．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：

1你能参加公益活动的时间； 2．你参加公益活动的原因； 3．你能胜任什么类型的活动． 常用到的重点短语： would like to do sth 想要做某事 join sb 加入某人的行列 in need 处于危急中

help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 chat with sb 与某人聊天 【高分句型】

1．I would like to join you①because②it is meaningful to help people ③in need． ①because引导的原因状语从句．

②it is+adj+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

③in need处于危急中，做后置定语，修饰people．

2．Just as the saying goes，\"Fragrance remains in the hand that gives roses．\" 谚语的引用．Fragrance remains in the hand that gives roses．赠人玫瑰，手留余香． 【解答】One possible version： Dear Chairperson，

I would like to join Nanjing C Foundation to be a voluntary worker．

First，let me introduce myself．I am a Grade 9 student at Nanjing School．As a student，I am very busy，but I can do some voluntary work at weekends．I am free on Sunday afternoons．（能参加公益活动的时间）

I would like to join you because it is meaningful to help people in need．【高分句型】Just as the saying goes，\"Fragrance remains in the hand that gives roses．\"【高分句型】I will also be happy if I can be of some help to others．（参加公益活动的原因）

I can help primary school students with their homework．I can also chat with the elderly and help them do some housework．（能胜任什么类型的活动）

I will be very happy if I can be a member of you．You can email me at Sam@Nanjing School．com． Yours sincerely Sam

【点评】这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．

34．最近，你们学校公众号\"佳文共赏\"栏日将以\"My hero\"为题开展一次作文 评选，请以此为题写一篇短文，介绍你所敬佩的一位文体类名人，向该栏目投稿．

My hero Talents and achievements Difficulties he / she met and how he /

she dealt with them

Charity work

Your opinion（s） about him / her 要求：1． 80 词左右，语句流畅通顺； 2． 文章需涵盖以上要点，并作适当发挥； 3． 文中不得出现任何考生真实姓名； 【分析】【高分句型一】

Useful expression：

have a gift for， win an award for， … never give up achieve success through， …

far more than， devote…to… be famous for / as， …

I think he is my hero， not only because he is famous for playing badminton， but also because he is a kind man．

我认为他是我的英雄，不仅因为他以打羽毛球而闻名，也因为他是一个善良的人．I think+宾语从句； not only…but also…不仅…而且… 【高分句型二】

I want to work hard to make great progress in my study．

我要努力学习，取得更大进步．want to do sth想要做某事；动词不定式做目的状语，make progress取得进步． 【解答】My hero

My name is Zhao Ming Hao．I am crazy about sports．My hero is Lin Dan（点题，我的偶像是林丹）．Lin Dan has got great achievements．He has a gift for playing badminton and won won the badminton Olympic championship．（天赋和成就）He had some technical problems in training， but he never gives up achieving success through many years' of hard work．（遇到的问题以及解决办法）He loves charity and has donated far more than one million yuan to charity successively．（慈善工作）I think he is my hero， not only because he is famous for playing badminton， but also because he is a kind man． 【高分句型一】

As a student，I decide to learn from Lin Dan．I will try to achieve a balance between my school work and hobbies．I want to work hard to make great progress in my study．【高分句型二】（我的观点和努力方向）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

35．假设你是顾华，你的英国网友Sam给你发了一封邮件，想详细了解你在艺术领域方面的喜好．请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件中的内容用英语回复．

To：Guhua@ 163．com From：Sam@yahoo．com Subject：Art Form

Dear Hua，

Glad to hear from you．You said you like art better than sports．I'd like to know more about it．

1．What's your favourite art form？What do you think of it？

2．Who has influenced you most in this area？What can you learn from him/her？ 3．Do you have any problems when you practice it？What have you done with them？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you．

All the best， Sam 注意事项：

1．英文邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．词数90个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4．邮件内容必须写在答题卷的指定位置．

To：Sam@yahoo．com From：Guhua@163．com Subject：Re：Art Form

Dear Sam，

I'm happy to tell you about my favourite art form．

Do you love art？Write to me soon．

Best wishes， Gu Hua 【分析】【高分句型一】

I think dancing can make me relax．我认为跳舞可以让我放松． I think+宾语从句． make sb+形容词，使某人… 【高分句型二】

At first，it was difficult for me to perform well when I practiced it．起初，当我练习的时候很难表现好．

It is+形容词 for sb to do sth．某人做某事是…的． when引导时间状语从句． 【解答】Dear Sam，

I'm happy to tell you about my favourite art form．（点题）

I like dancing best．I think dancing can make me relax．【高分句型一】We can show our love for life through dancing．Dancing cheers me up when I am blue and calms me down when I am

too excited．（我喜欢的艺术形式及我的看法）My favorite dancer is Jin Xing．She is one of the greatest dancers in China．I learned a lot from him．She teaches me what to when I am in trouble．It is the most important to try to achieve your dream．（谁对我影响很大，以及我学到了什么）At first，it was difficult for me to perform well when I practiced it．【高分句型二】But I've made a lot of progress by exercising for two hours every day．（遇到的困难及解决办法）

Do you love art？Write to me soon．

Best wishes， Gu Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

36．无锡地铁一号线将于2014年6月投入使用，这是无锡人民生活中的一件大事，对此许多人发表了自己的看法．作为一名校英语报记者，请据此在答题卷指定的位置上写一篇80词左右的英文报道．内容提示如下：

1．乘坐地铁更快捷方便，安全性能更高，地铁票价不是很贵；

2．如果人们不开自备车而改乘地铁，可以缓解交通拥堵，减少大气和噪音污染，有利于环境保护；

3．地铁能为人们出行提供多一种选择； 4．你的看法．

要求：1．报道必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．第4要点用2～3句展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3．报道开头已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数．

Wuxi Underground Line 1 will be in use in June，2014．Many people think

【分析】这是篇命题作文．题中给出了写作要点和要求．写作时，一定要按照要求注意要点的齐全．表述时句子要连贯，可使用一些连接性的句子和短语，增加文章的逻辑性． 高分句型：

①If people go out by underground instead of driving their own cars，the road will be less crowded．如果人们坐地铁出行而不是开私家车，那么道路就不会那么拥挤了．句子中if引导一个条件状语从句，主句用的是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时，instead of而不是，of是个介词，后面跟动词的ing形式．

②it is good for protecting the environment．这有利于保护环境．句子中be good for对…有利，for是个介词，后面跟动词的ing形式．

【解答】Wuxi underground line 1 will be in use in June，2014．（引出话题．Some people think it's faster and easier to take the underground and it is much safer．One underground ticket is not very expensive．If people go out by underground instead of driving their own cars，the road will be less crowded．（高分句型） And there will be less air and noise pollution，too．So，it is good for protecting the environment．（高分句型） Luckily，people will have one more

choice to go to other places．（乘坐地铁的好处）I think underground is great．I will choose to go by underground and I hope more people will take underground．（我的看法）

【点评】这篇作文要点齐全，表述准确流利．文章使用了一些很有用的表达方式和句型，例如：If people go out by underground instead of driving their own cars，the road will be less crowded．如果人们坐地铁出行而不是开私家车，那么道路就不会那么拥挤了．If引导条件状语从句；instead of而不是．So，it is good for protecting the environment．所以，这有利于保护环境．Be good for对…有利．

37．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．

假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办一场阅读沙龙（Reading Salon），你打算邀请你们班交换生Tim参加，请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点和内容，以及需要做什么 准备．

提示词语：introduce， talk about，learn

提示问题：When and where will you hold the Reading Salon？ What will you do at the Salon？ What do you advise Tim to prepare for it？

Dear Tim，

How is everything going？ There'll be a Reading Salon in our school．

Looking forward to your early reply．

Li Hua

【分析】高分句型一：

Since you are the book lover，could you please introduce how to develop the habit of reading？ since因为；could you please do…？ 提出要求．这句话意为：因为你是读书爱好者，您能否介绍下如何培养阅读的习惯？ 高分句型二：

I hope we can learn a lot from you about reading．

learn sth from sb向某人学习．这句话意为：我希望我们能向您学习阅读． 【解答】Dear Tim，

How is everything going？ There'll be a Reading Salon in our school．Let me tell you something about it．（开篇点明主题）

First，The Reading Salon will be held on next Thursday in the reading room．It will start at 9：00 a．m．Since you are the book lover，could you please introduce how to develop the habit of reading？（高分句型一）and you also can talk about the reading skills you use and introduce the books you like．You can prepare some books you like from the library so that you can give them brief introduction about the books．I hope we can learn a lot from you about reading（高分句型

二）．（具体介绍时间，地点，内容等） Looking forward to your early reply． Li Hua

【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

38．为提高中学生英语阅读素养，学校将在下学期全面推进英语课外阅读活动（English extensive reading）．据此，校刊HAVE YOUR SAY栏目在广大学生中开展征文活动，以了解学生真实想法．假设你是李明，请认真阅读征稿启事，并根据征稿内容用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法． Hi，

In our column， HAVE YOUR SAY， you are free to say what you think． This month we hope you can share your ideas about English extensive reading in our school next term： • How do you like English extensive reading？ • What is your special reading experience？

• What problems do/may you have while doing the reading？ • What's your advice or hope？ Looking forward to hearing from you．

Sigmund Friend 注意事项：

1． 征文须包括启事中提及内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2． 词数80个左右，征文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 3． 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4． 征文内容必须写在答题纸的指定位置上． ______________． 【分析】【高分句型一】

I like English extensive reading because it's meaningful．我喜欢英语泛读，因为它很有意义． because引导原因状语从句． 【高分句型二】

I hope I can remember more words by reading．我希望我能通过阅读记住更多的单词． I hope+宾语从句．

【解答】I'm glad to share my ideas about English extensive reading in our school next term．（点题）

I like English extensive reading because it's meaningful．【高分句型一】 It helps improve our knowledge．（觉得英语泛读怎么样） Once I read a book called Gulliver's Travels． It tells us a story of a young man's amazing journey． It opens up a new world to me．（分享经历） While doing the reading， I sometimes can not understand the new words and long sentences．（遇到的问题） I hope I can remember more words by reading．【高分句型二】

Moreover， I hope the teachers will give us advice on how to improve our reading skills．（希望）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

39．\"五一\"小长假，你们全家去锡惠公园游玩．请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文参加以\"How to Behave Politely\"为主题的征文比赛，并适当加以评论．要点提示：

亲身经历

1．我们玩得正开心，不文明的一幕发生了：一位女士满不在乎将垃圾扔

在地上；

2．我试图阻止，但她拒绝听我的； 3．我将垃圾捡起来并扔进垃圾桶；

我的观点

4．人人都应该学习一些有关礼仪方面的知识；

5．列举不同场合须有的文明行为； 6．对我们来说，提升礼仪是必须的．

注意：1．征文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第5点须用2～3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥；

3．词数80个左右，短文标题和开头已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数． 【分析】高分句型一：

We were enjoying ourselves when something impolite happened．

句中\"when something impolite happened\"为时间状语从句，\"enjoy oneself\"意为\"玩得开心\"．这句话意为：当不愉快的事情发生时，我们玩得正开心． 高分句型二：

It's necessary for us to improve our manners．

这句话的句式为：it is+形容词+for sb to do sth．句中\"it\"为形式主语，代指\"to improve our manners\"．这句话意为：对我们来说，提升礼仪很必要． 【解答】How to Behave Politely

During this May Day Holiday，all my family visited Xihui Park．We were enjoying ourselves when something impolite happened．【高分句型一】A lady dropped some litter carelessly on the ground．I tried to stop her from doing that，but she refused to listen to me．I picked it up and threw it into the dustbin．（叙述自己的经历）I think everyone should learn something about manners．（提出自己的观点）When we are in the library，we should keep quiet．When we cross the road，we should obey traffic rules．Before we get on a bus，we should queue for our turn． （建议怎么去做）It's necessary for us to improve our manners．【高分句型二】（总结全文）

【点评】写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．

40．某校正在开展\"走进新时代，争当合格中学生\"的演讲比赛，请以\"We act， we improve\"为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？ 演讲稿应

包括以下内容：

（1）学会自立，诚实友善，举止文明； （2）培养习惯，发展兴趣，不断创新； （3）关心他人，和谐相处，懂得感恩； （4）…… 要求：

（1）要点齐全，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名； （3）卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加 2﹣3 分；

（4）词数：80 词左右．开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．

We act， we improve

Ladies and gentlemen，

We have entered a new era． As students， it's our duty to study hard． But to be a qualified middle school student， I think we have a lot of things to do． 【分析】高分句型一：

we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us我们应该关心他人，感谢那些帮助我们的人． 句中who引导的定语从句，修饰people． 高分句型二：

the more we act， the better we will improve我们行动的越多，我们就会越好． the+比较级，the+比较级：越……就越…… 【解答】Ladies and gentlemen We act， we improve

We have entered a new era． As students， it's our duty to study hard． But to be a qualified middle school student， I think we have a lot of things to do．

First， we should learn to be independent and honest． We're supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public．（学会自立，诚实友善，举止文明） Second， we should have good habits． Habits play an important role in our life． We'd better develop our interests and the ability to create．（培养习惯，发展兴趣，不断创新） Third， we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us．（高分句型一） Value the time we spend with our family and friends in our daily life．（关心他人，和谐相处，懂得感恩；） Last but not least， I think we should exercise more to keep healthy．（强身健体） In a word， the more we act， the better we will improve．（高分句型二）

【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

41．2022年北京冬奥会即将到来，北京冬奥宣讲团来我校做有关冬奥会的演讲。假如你是

我校一名小记者，请根据下面的一份会议记录，为校报写一篇英文报道。 2022冬奥会宣讲会议记录 宣讲人：奥运会运动员 时间：4月15日下午 地点：学校礼堂 参加人员：全体初三学生 宣讲内容： （1）分享奥运故事； （2）室传奥运精神；

（3）呼吁大家参与志愿服务、结交国际友人、传播中外文化 我们的感受：…… 注意：

（1）词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数； （2）回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； （3）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Recently，the Education Tour for 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics has come to our school and made an exciting speech to the students.

【分析】高分句型一：

They asked young people to take part in some voluntary work so that we can make friends with people from other countries and spread different cultures.他们要求年轻人参加一些志愿工作，这样我们就可以和其他国家的人交朋友，传播不同的文化。ask sb to do sth表示要求某人做某事。 高分句型二：

Why not take action now？为什么现在不采取行动？why not do sth表示为什么不做某事，表示一种意见或者建议。

【解答】Recently，the Education Tour for 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics has come to our school and made an exciting speech to the students.（引出话题）

On the afternoon of April 15，all the Grade 9 students got together in the school hall and enjoyed the speech.（时间及地点）At first some famous Chinese Olympic athletes shared their

interesting stories with us.Then，they expressed the hope of letting more people know about the Olympic spirits.They asked young people to take part in some voluntary work so that we can make friends with people from other countries and spread different cultures.【高分句型一】（内容）

After listening to the speech，we were deeply moved and encouraged.Why not take action now？【高分句型二】（感受）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

42．\"五一小长假\"快到了．假如你是Millie，想要邀请你扬州的朋友Alice来你家做客．根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信．

地理位置 社区

市中心公寓里，住在9楼，离曲江楼（Qujiang Building）只有2公里远

绿树环绕，干净整洁……

邻居友好，乐于助人，志愿者……（至少举一例）

路线

乘火车从姜堰火车站（Jiangyan Railway Station）出来；乘819路公共汽车在人民桥（Renming Bridge）下，往前；第1个路口右转，你就会看到

一个超市；我家就在超市的旁边．

要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； Dear Alice，

I am very happy to invite you to my new home．

Welcome to my home．I think you'll have a good time here． Yours， Millie

【分析】【高分句型一】

When you get out of Jiangyan Railway Station，take No．819 Bus and get off at Renming Bridge．当你走出姜堰火车站，乘819路公共汽车在人民桥下车． when引导时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】

I think you'll have a good time here．我认为你在这里会玩得很开心． I think +宾语从句；have a good time 玩的开心． 【解答】Dear Alice，

I am very happy to invite you to my new home．My home is on the ninth floor in a flat in the city centre．It's only 2 kilometres away from Qujiang Building．（地理位置）

In our community，there are green trees everywhere．It's clean and tidy．You can smell the beautiful flowers and hear birds sing in the morning．The neighbours are kind and helpful．The volunteers often help the elderly do some cleaning．We are like a big family．（社区）

You can come here by train．When you get out of Jiangyan Railway Station，take No．819 Bus and get off at Renming Bridge．【高分句型一】Walk straight on，take the first turning on the right and then you will see a supermarket．My home is next to it．You can't miss it!（路线） Welcome to my home．I think you'll have a good time here．（表示欢迎）【高分句型二】 Yours， Millie

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

43．你是光明实验中学的九年级学生张佳，在网上看到了学生家长Iceberg的博客，她的博客内容如下：

I'm the mother of a fifteen﹣year﹣old girl．I have a rule for my daughter．She should be among the top 3 students，or she'll be punished（惩罚）in one way or another．So far she has really done very well in school．But some friends of mine keep telling me that

I put too much stress on her．Am I wrong？

你读了Iceberg的博客内容，请给这位家长进行回复．回复须包含如下要点： 1．表明你的看法；

2．陈述你的理由（至少两条）并举例说明； 3．提出你的建议（至少两条）．

注意：1．词数90左右．回信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．信须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．信中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Hi，Mother Iceberg，

Your worry is very common to parents in China．

As far as I'm concerned，it is not quite right for you to do so．My reasons are as follows． Firstly，too much pressure leads to lack of time to participate in after﹣class activities．As a result，your daughter can't get fully developed．Furthermore，by no means is punishment a wise choice to help her build self﹣confidence，which is of great importance and value to a person． So I suggest you take your friends' advice．Instead of putting too much pressure on you daughter，it is more advisable to allow her more time for other activities．Besides，you might as well let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do and give her support and encouragement in time．

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful． Zhang Jia ． 【分析】高分句型一：

Furthermore，by no means is punishment a wise choice to help her build self﹣confidence，which is of great importance and value to a person．

更重要的是，惩罚决不是帮助她建立自信心的明智选择，这对一个人来说是非常重要和有价值的．which引导的定语从句．

高分句型二：

Instead of putting too much pressure on you daughter，it is more advisable to allow her more time for other activities．

与其给你的女儿太多的压力，让她有更多的时间做其他活动更可取．考查句式it is adj．to do．

【解答】Hi，Mother Iceberg，

Your worry is very common to parents in China．As far as I'm concerned，it is not quite right for you to do so．（作者的看法）My reasons are as follows．

Firstly，too much pressure leads to lack of time to participate in after﹣class activities．As a result，your daughter can't get fully developed．Furthermore，by no means is punishment a wise choice to help her build self﹣confidence，which is of great importance and value to a person（高分句型一）．（陈述理由）

So I suggest you take your friends' advice．Instead of putting too much pressure on you daughter，it is more advisable to allow her more time for other activities（高分句型二）．Besides，you might as well let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do and give her support and encouragement in time．

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．（提出建议） Yours Zhang Jia

【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

44．健康的生活习惯对于成长中的学生非常重要．最近你们学校就\"健康的生活习惯\"话题向全体学生征文．请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校投稿． 健康的生活习惯

早睡早起 适当锻炼 合理饮食 注意卫生 …（补充1点）

你的想法 注意：

1．词数90左右．短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数．

2．短文须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息．

Keeping healthy

It is so important to make\"keeping healthy\"a part of our day﹣to﹣day living habits． ．

…（自拟1点）

【分析】【高分句型一】

Staying up too late is bad for our health．熬夜对我们的健康有害． staying up too late 熬夜太晚．动名词作主语． be bad for对……有坏处． 【高分句型二】

As Grade Nine students， we have to spend more time on study．作为九年级的学生，我们必须花更多的时间在学习上． spend on在……上花费…… 【解答】Keeping healthy

It is so important to make \"keeping healthy\" a part of our day﹣to﹣day living habits．（点题） All of us want to be healthy． We should get enough sleep during the night and get up early． Staying up too late is bad for our health．【高分句型一】 We should do more exercise to build up our bodies．We must also have a balanced diet． We need to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat．

Keeping good habits can help us prevent the disease． Remember to wash our hands properly before eating， after going to the bathroom and getting home． If necessary， we should wear masks．Most of us have teenage problems． We can reduce stress by listening to music， reading books or talking to our parents， friends and teachers for help．（健康的生活习惯） As Grade Nine students， we have to spend more time on study．【高分句型二】 However， keeping good habits and staying happy are ways to be healthy．（我的想法）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

45．\"书籍是人类进步的阶梯．\"我们青少年应该从小养成多读书、读好书的习惯，而且我们有很多途径去阅读．请写一份倡议书，让更多的学生参与到读书的活动中来．

好处 1 能更多地了解世界 2 可以结交更多的朋友

3 让自己开心 4 …（自拟1点）

要求：

1．所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥； 2．词数80左右．开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息．

\"Reading a good book is a conversation（对话）with a lot of good people．\" As a student，we should read books in our free time． …

As we all know，the National Reading has been put in the Government Work Report in order

途径 1 学校图书馆 2 从同学那里借书看

3 网上看书 1 …（自拟1点）

to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people．Reading can help us to know more about the world．Books make usable to learn about the past and look forward to the future．We can appreciate the local conditions，customs and national events of the world．They are the most valuable things in the world．We can borrow books to

read from the school library．Reading can make more friends．We can borrow books from our classmates．We can communicate and get along well．We can make ourselves happy by reading online．Reading can make us progress．We can get a great deal of knowledge and skills from class．Let books be our good friends all the time．

Reading is great fun．Let's read more good books． 【分析】高分句型一

As we all know，the National Reading has been put in the Government Work Report in order to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people．此句是以As引起的原因状语从句．从句中用的是现在完成时．运用短语

in order to\"为了\"，短语a love of reading \"阅读的热爱\"，此句可翻译为\" 因为我们都知道，在政府的工作报告中加入了国家阅读，为了鼓励所有中国人热爱阅读．\" 高分句型二

Let books be our good friends all the time．此句是祈使句．运用句型Let …\"让…吧！运用短语all the time \"一直\"．此句可翻译为\"让书一直是我们的好朋友吧．\"

【解答】\"Reading a good book is a conversation with a lot of good people．\" As a student，we should read books in our free time．As we all know，the National Reading has been put in the Government Work Report in

order to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people．（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍阅读的重要性．）Reading can help us to know more about the world．Books make us able to learn about the past and look

forward to the future．We can appreciate the local conditions，customs and national events of the world．They are the most valuable things in the world．We can borrow books to read from the school library．

Reading can make more friends．We can borrow books from our classmates．We can communicate and get along well．We can make ourselves happy by reading online．Reading can make us progress．We can get a

great deal of knowledge and skills from class．（要点二，阅读的好处及通过的途径．） Let books be our good friends all the time．（高分句型二）Reading is great fun．Let's read more good books．（要点三，号召我们都要阅读好书．）

【点评】本题是图表作文，能够根据图表内容进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

46．\"学习\"是一个终身的话题，最近学校正在讨论怎样爱上学习这个话题，请你根据下面表格中的提示，以\"How to Love Study\"为题，用英语阐述自己的观点．

同学们的观点

方式 读书 交友 旅游

理由

增长知识，提高解决问题的能力，使生活丰富多彩 交比自己强的人，多与他们交流，学习他们好的行为

开阔我们的眼界，了解各地文化 …（至少说出一点理由）

我的观点 …

注意：1．词数90左右．短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数；

2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息．

How to Love Study

Recently，we have discussed the different way to love study．Here are the result．Most of students think reading is a better way to help us love study．

【分析】此作文要求写一篇提纲作文．题目为：How to Love Study（如何爱学习）．时态用一般现在时态．动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．通过阅读材料可知这篇作文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，题中包含了这些要点：①读书，增长知识，提高解决问题的能力，使生活丰富多彩；②交友，交比自己强的人，多与他们交流，学习他们好的行为；③旅游，开阔我们的眼界，了解各地文化．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．

高分句型一：Reading can increase our knowledge and improve our ability to solve problem，读书能增加我们的知识，提高我们解决问题的能力．这是一个动名词做主语的句子，reading 是主语，can increase和 improve是谓语动词．

高分句型二：We had better make more friends，especially the persons who are stronger than us．你最好多交朋友，特别是比我们强壮的人．had better最好…，后跟动词原形，后半部分 who are stronger than us是定语从句，修饰先行词persons． 【解答】How to Love Study

Recently，we have discussed the different way to love study．Here are the result．Most of students think reading is a better way to help us to love study．

As we all know，reading can increase our knowledge and improve our ability to solve problem【高分句型一，注意动名词做主语】．It also can make our lives more colorful．【要点一】 Making friends is another good way to help you love study．We had better make more friends，especially the persons who are stronger than us【高分句型二，注意定语从句的使用】．We need to help too much with them and learn good acts from them．【要点二】What's more，travelling is also a good way to love study．Travelling to different places can open up a new world to us．We can learn more different cultures in different places．【要点三】I think studying is interesting，if we want to study well，we should study happily．【要点四】 【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，

then等．

47．请给你的美国笔友Sandy写一封信，信中介绍你家乡Starlight Town的情况，并邀请对方到你家乡来玩．

1．一个很安静的小镇，离扬州很近，有很多好玩有趣的东西可看； 2．空气新鲜，河流干净，到处可见花草树木；

3．人们友好且互相帮助，经常帮助住在社区里的人解决不同的困难； 4．镇中心有一个商场，我经常周末和妈妈去那购物； 5．我很享受这儿的生活，住在这儿很幸运；欢迎来我的家乡． 要求：1．词数80 字左右． 2．要点完整，语句通顺． Dear Sandy _______．

【分析】【高分句型一】

If you come，I'll show you around Starlight Town．如果你来，我将带你参观星光镇． if引导条件状语从句． 【高分句型二】

I am looking forward to meeting you soon．我期待很快见到你． look forward to doing sth期待做某事． 【解答】Dear Sandy，

How are you？I am glad to hear from you，and I hope you will come to my hometown．（点题）

My hometown Starlight Town is a small town．It is next to Yangzhou city，several kilometers from Yangzhou city．There are many interesting things to be worth visiting．The air is fresh here．The river is clean．You can see many flowers and trees here and there．People are friendly and help each other．They often help the people living in the community out with different problems．There is a shopping center in the center of the town．I often go shopping on the weekends with my mother．（介绍家乡）

I enjoy my life here and it is lucky for me to live here．（感受）

Welcome to my hometown．If you come，I'll show you around Starlight Town．【高分句型一】

I am looking forward to meeting you soon．【高分句型二】（期待）

Yours， Li Lei 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

48．最近，你们班开展了一次主题班会，主要讨论了作为中学生如何更好地与父母沟通交流．假如你是李华，请根据下面的内容和要求给父母写一封信．文中不得出现真实的个人

信息． 内容提示：

1．告诉父母自己三年来的学习情况和收获： 2．和父母说说自己在成长过程中的一些心里话；

3．表达自己对父母的爱，并告诉父母自己会继续努力学习，不让他们担心，做开心一家人． 注意：

1．词数90左右．信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 2．信中须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥； 3．信中不得不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． My dear mother and father，

I will graduate from school soon，and I'd like to talk about______________ Wish you all the best．

Yours Li Hua．

【分析】【高分句型一】

I think I studied hard，made some good friends and was really happy．我认为我努力学习，取得了一些好朋友，真的很开心． I think+宾语从句 【高分句型二】

I will keep on studying hard to get good grades and achieve my dream．我将继续努力学习，取得好成绩，实现我的梦想．

keep on doing sth继续做某事；to get good grades and achieve my dream是不定式表目的． 【解答】My dear mother and father，

I will graduate from school soon，and I'd like to talk about my life and studies in school to you．（要点一：三年来的学习情况和收获）During the past three years．I think I studied hard，made some good friends and was really happy．【高分句型一】But there was probably something wrong between us．（要点二：和父母亲说说心里话）I know you love me so much，but I also know you may be not interested in some of my hobbies，such as playing basketball，playing the guitar and chatting with my friends．They really waste time，but they are parts of my life．So I hope you can encourage and support me to do something that I like．Now I have already grown up a lot．I will keep on studying hard to get good grades and achieve my dream．【高分句型二】Besides，I hope you can spare your time to stay and chat with me，so we can get on better．I love you very much and I believe we will be a happy family forever．（要点三：表达自己的目标） Wish you all the best．

Yours Li Hua．

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和

句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

49．地球是我们人类共同的家园．\"低碳、环保\"已成为当今时代主题．目前，《学英语》杂志准备在八年级学生中开展以\"Save our earth\"为主题的英文征文活动．现请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇100词左右的短文参评．

importance Problems Steps

have only one earth

not have enough resources，have kinds of pollution，such as…

To save water To save power To reduce pollution To have a green lifestyle

注意：（1）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名；

（2）文章标题已给出，短文给出的文字不计入总词数； （3）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯． Save Our Earth

Earth is our home． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】

It is important for us to save our earth对于我们来说拯救我们地球是重要的．

it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语． 【高分句型二】

①In order to save power，we should turn off the lights ②when we leave a room为了节约能源，我们离开房间的时候应该关灯． ①in order to do sth 为了做某事．做目的状语． ②when引导的时间状语从句． 【解答】Save Our Earth

Earth is our home．We have only one earth．It is important for us to save our earth．【高分句型一】（重要性）

Our environment is changing for the worse．We have many problems．Nature is our greatest treasure．We depend on its rich resources to live．However，we don't have enough resources to use．At the same time，we have kinds of pollution，such as air pollution，water pollution and noise pollution．（问题）

It's time for us to go green．Here are some simple steps to take．We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth．In order to save power，we should turn off the lights when we leave a room．【高分句型二】We should not use plastic bags．Instead，we should take our own bags when shopping．Moreover，it is important for us to develop a green lifestyle．We should do more exercise and watch less TV．（措施） Follow these small steps，and you can make a big difference to the Earth．

…（至少写一点） …（至少写一点） …（至少写一点） …（至少写一点）

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．

50．寒假期间你们全家去水上公园游玩．请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文参加以\"How to Behave（表现） Politely\"为主题的征文比赛，并适当加以评论．要点提示：

亲身经历

（1）我们玩得正开心，不和谐的一幕发生了；一位女士将垃圾扔在地

上；

（2）我试图阻止，但她拒绝听我的；相反还嘲笑我；

（3）我将垃圾捡起来并扔进垃圾桶；

我的观点

（1）我们应该关注自己的礼仪（manners）；

（2）当在不同场合时我们应该……

注意：（1）征文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； （2）第5点须用2～3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥； （3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数． How to Behave Politely

During this Winter Holiday， all my family visited Water Park 【分析】高分句型：

We were enjoying ourselves when something unpleasant happened．当一些不愉快的事情发生时，我们玩得正开心．这里enjoy oneself表示玩的高兴，过的愉快，when引导一个时间状语从句．

I tried to stop her from doing that ，but she refused to listen to me．我试图阻止她做那件事，但她拒绝听我说．这里try to do sth表示试图做某事，stop sb doing sth表示阻止某人做某事，refuse to do sth表示拒绝做某事． 【解答】How to Behave Politely

During this Winter Holiday， all my family visited Water Park．（引出话题） We were enjoying ourselves when something unpleasant happened （高分句型）．A lady threw some litter on the ground．I tried to stop her from doing that ，but she refused to listen to me（高分句型）．Instead ，she laughed at me， I picked it up and threw it into the dustbin．（我的亲身经历）

I think we should pay attention to our manners．When we are in the the library ，we should keep quiet．When we cross the road ，We should watch the traffic lights first． Before we get on a bus ，we should wait in line．（我的观点）

【点评】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．本文主要针对如何注意自己的言行举止，通过作者在公园遇到的一件事，引发了我们在公众场合怎样关注自己的礼仪，温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．