读后续写实用模板

读后续写实用模板

越来越多的省份加入到了读后续写，但是多老师和学生，还不知道这个题型怎么去教，

今天我写一下续写的模板，希望对大家有用。我从来不反对模板，实际上模板是一个好事，如果没有模板的话，我们的孩子是很难写个框架的，所以模板可以最好地理解为框架，如果我们能够去模板化，那么它就不是模板。下面从几个方面解析：

第一看一道高考题

A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE

The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.

The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.

Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.

第二怎么去用模板 P1五句

第一句 动作或者心理状态，承接所给第一句 第二句 人物之间的对话 第三句 动作和情节

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第四句 动作和情节承接 第五句 联想p2第一句 p2 五句

第一句 心理或动作描写 第二句 人物之间的对话 第三句 动作情节承接 第四句 结尾

第五句 正能量结局

第三具体剖析 【原文分析】

本文以第三人称，描述了一对双胞胎在母亲节为妈妈做早餐，送上一份惊喜的故事。这也是新高考的第一次续写真题。整体难度不大，所描述事件贴近生活，是每个孩子都可能经历过的事情，故事情节的发展也一目了然。如何在平淡的情节上增加故事色彩，则是本篇文章写作的更高境界。

明线：A surprise

暗线：love between families

根据续写部分第一段的首句，可以知道正在双胞胎失望之时，父亲的出现给他们带来了希望。可以从以下的几个方面入手去考虑问题：

呈上： How did father feel on seeing the mess? 细节： What did father do to help?

启下： Who cooked the breakfast at last?

在第一段的描写当中，同学们可以充分的利用原文中的信息，描写做饭的场景。以达到对原文呼应的目的。父亲帮忙后，怎样还让母亲感觉到惊喜呢？这是父亲和孩子们之间的一个小秘密。 第二段则是向妈妈献上惊喜的时刻了。 呈上：What did they say?

细节：How did mother react and feel? 点题: What a surprise!

第二段可以运用到平时练习用过的表示惊喜、感动的情感描写。 温馨提示：据说，答题卡是长成这样子的，

行高8毫米，行宽≈19厘米（实际宽度18.7-18.8厘米）

读后续写:共18行（段落开头占2行，可写作的空间8.5行*2段）

所以，大家在写作的时候，特别是文采洋溢的同学们，一定要控制好字数。不要超出答题范围呀！

第四学生习作展示：

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Looking around the mess the twins made in the kitchen,he couldn’t believe what had happened.So shocked and angry was he that he could not speak one word for a moment.”What happened?”he asked trembly.The twins drooped their heads and sobbed, “We want to make a breakfast for mother, but now everything is

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destroyed.”He hearing that,a surge warmth flew in father’s heart.A smile appear on his face,”let’s do it together.”Delighted and surprised,the twins swallowed the sadness and devoted his time to preparing the breakfast.

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.“Happy Mother’s Day”,they said with excited tune and presented the breakfast to mom carefully. A sense of surprise swept the sleepy feeling,“Did you make it? For me?”she said in a soft and happy tune.After getting the answer,she couldn’t stand to hug the twins tightly.Looking at the breakfast she was lost in the delicious food and the pure happiness.”It’s the most precious gift I have ever received,it makes me become the most happy person in the world.”mom said ,with delightful tears streaming her face.The whole room was bathed in a happy Mother’s Day atmosphere.The dawning sunshine lit up the whole room, with air being sweet. 第五标准范文：

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Sensing something wrong, the father asked curiously what happened. After knowing the truth, the father smiled, touching the twins’ head gently, saying “My sweet kids. So nice of you to plan such a surprise. Let’s do it together, okay?”. Hearing this, the boys face suddenly lit up, jumping up and down with joy. With everyone sharing different roles, it didn’t take long for the three of them to get everything done. Soon, a well-designed French toast and a bowl of porridge were ready.

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Opening her eyes, the mother even couldn’t believe what she saw! Standing in front of her were the twins, with Jeff holding a delicate French toast and Jenna a bowl of chicken porridge, followed by “Mom, We love you!” from the kids. Deeply touched, the mother said thank you and hugged the kids, tears already blurring her eyes. That whole morning witnessed a happy time spent among them with everyone bathed in the warmth of a family. What a loving scene!

总结：今天就读后续写模板写了一些自己的看法，以后再更。

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